Hovering Sipper

I expanded the cinquain form here to 7 lines–a septtain? 2, 4, 6, 8, 6, 4, 2 syllables per line. Syllabics can be pleasurable–for the writer, at least–sometimes. 

Hovering Sipper

A hum-
ming bird, its back
iridescent green, its
gray wing-blur wrapping its body,
sips shots from the powder blue
rosemary blooms.
April.

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